On a contemporary season
without a christmas
Helen found me
making jokes
of our mutual life.
She always hoped
something different
had ocurred to her:
"get out out of my life"
- she said.
But i took her
out of mine,
and that was it.
We both died:
me, alone
she, in christmas.
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She always hoped
something different
has ocurred to her:
"get out out of my life"
- she said.
AND I SAY THAT.... IT'S WONDERFULL
TNAK YOU FRIEND, BUT NEXT TIME IN CHISTIAN LANGUAGE
I will, dear Pedro, but that is the way it came out of my soul
Pegaso
CUALQUIERA QUE SEA EL CAMINO, LO QUE LO VALIDA ES EL DESTINO
UN ABRAZO.
Poor Pegaso! It's better to fall in love and not to die. Jokes are very dangerous, I understood now. Next time, you shouldn't join with boring girls. You should write poems, have a cup of a good Rioja and just look though the window people's troubles, for instance.
Your poem in "christian language" hasn´t got the way you can express, has it?...
You've got a great problem with me: I'm not going to get out of your poetry..
See you, my friend,
Fidel
You're right Fidel, but what can i say now if it was written october 8th, 1982?
I'll be here pal
Pegaso
Long time ago, isn't it? And you´re alive, I see.
Fidel
P.D. I think it's a mistake to write in Englisn. After now, we´re gonnato do it in Spanish cos many of our friends can't understand, right?...
One secret, je ne comprends trés bien l'Anglais, Hi, hi, hi... or maybe I do? Seulement es una "joke"!. Viva el "esperanto" hablar algun día con el lenguaje de my soul. Qué "cacao" I have!
Ezkerrik asko for this moment!
Gero Arte!
🙂
... que nunca se me dió el inglés. prefiero las lenguas romances.
-] "BUT NEXT TIME IN CHISTIAN LANGUAGE"
je suis d'accord
Je t'adore,
Fue maravilloso. Como ver la nieve caer... en una película muda
Besos
Est le seul poème dans cette langue.
La verdad Grettell, este poema nunca supe realmente de dónde salió... fue muy extraño, sencillamente salió, y salió así.
Pero también a mí me encantó
Me too
MY POET IS YOUR BEAUTIFUL POEM, WITH LOT OF FEELING
HOPE YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY... KISSES
KALITA SAY:
GOOD BYE.......................................
Thank you Kalita.
I hope your day shines too.
Pegaso
My dear poet, your poem is beautiful...That's life, sometimes love is with us, other times it gives us back, why would this in your case? Maybe it was not true love ...Memories often bring us nostalgic moments...
Congratulations, I loved reading it...
Regards and kisses...
Elo.
Thank you Elo for your kind and bright comments.
In fact i wroted it many years ago, and it does not resembles any thing in my life at all. It just came out from my pen easily.
Kisses...
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