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As the day declines
I watch the sky
displaying a fan of colors
in the tones of pinks and purples.
Only one star shines very bright
I see you smile and twinkle an eye
and I laugh!
You are watching me
to keep me out of mischief
yes I can hear you loud and clear
"don't be naughty' you say to me.
Am I naughty? really!
You know, I saw a cascade of blue dripping waters
falling from above with a tinkling inviting sound
a necklace of bubbly gems
turning violet when they reach me.
We swim in the waters of the lake
where i spend long hours in contemplation
observing and reflecting my expressions.
In gracious swirling slow movements
shimmering rapture
we glide through the waters
in concentric circles
bodies entwined propelled by tremors.
Like a mirror the lake reflects
the image of our souls
floating above the whispering water
delicate sweet sounds
of ruffled wings.
Merche DemBar
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Merche DemBar (Seudónimo) (
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thanks, my lady, your's letters are beautiful, and wonderfull. from kalita, your friends.
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..........♥KALITA♥
GRACIAS MI REINA KALITA SIEMPRE MUY ATENTA Y CARIÑOSA
BESITOS
MERCHE
I feel comfortable making a comment to a poem in English, not only for being my native language, because I based on other criteria of the language.
I find the poem interesting development in a natural environment such as waterfalls, plus some creative lines in the construction of metaphors, such as this, "a necklace of gems bubbly"
However, if I may a council, the omission of punctuation, and transverse images in drafting language cosntrucción logic in the poem do something like "inconsistent" in meaning and form ...
Know why I write in a Spanish-language forum, it is the language that I lovest in the world ...
It is interesting to know other languages, I share with you the love of learning different cultures through the language ... perhaps, if you want I can give you some addresses of other forums in English, French, German and Japanese ... perhaps they can develop more of his poetry in other languages.
Greetings
Clavel Rojo
THANK YOU YOKO FOR YOU ELABORATE AND INTERESTING COMMENT.
I AM AWARE THAT MAYBE SOMETIMES I MISS SOME PUNCTUATION, I CAN ASSURE YOU, I PUT A LOT OF EFFORT AND STUDY.
I PUBLISH ALREADY IN FORUMS OF DIFFERENT LANGUAGES AND FOLLOW WORKSHOPS.
GREETINGS
MERCHE
que abrigadores versos lo de hoy 😀
GRACIAS LO APRECIO
BESITOS
MERCHE
PERDÓN NO PUEDO ENTENDER EL INGLES .SI EL FRANCÉS .ABRAZOS.STELLA.
STELLA DOY UN TRADUCTOR CON EL POEMA SOLO TIENES QUE PONERLO ALLI.
AQUI ESTA LO QUE SALE:la primera estrofa.
Como el día disminuye
Miro el cielo
demostración de un abanico de colores
en los tonos de rosa y purpura.
Sólo un brillos de estrella muy brillantes
Yo le veo reír y centellear un ojo
¡y me río!
Lindo y colorido. y esas almas flotando susurrantes en el agua wuau y esos remolinos en el agua....
Como un espejo refleja el lago
la imagen de nuestras almas
flotando sobre el agua susurrante
delicados sonidos dulces
de las alas volantes
besos
yaxure
GRACIAS QUERIDA YAXURE ME ALEGRA QUE TE LLEGO
BIEN
BESITOS
MERCHE
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